Wednesday, 3 April 2013

synopsis, 1st draft for updated story

Howdy, since I have reedited the story again, I have made a quick 1st draft synopsis which will be redefined.


Upon an island lost in ocean where animals are lost from the ever changing sea. A highly evolved Lizard creature known as Rykin. Hunting with his spear on a small cliff looking out into the forest of the island. Arm raised and drawn back with his spear ready to hit the unsuspected animal grazing in the forest. Thunderous noises come out from the sea with a colossus storm heading for the island. The rocks underneath Rykin start shaking from the vibrations of the thunder, losing his balance and falling off the ledge plummeting towards the ground.

Face first into the ground with his body landing on the side of his spear, snapping it in two. Collecting the sharp end of the spear, he starts his way to find shelter from the dangerously growing storm. Redirecting his route from the path as parts of the island are inundated with water.  Locating a cave a few hundred metres away, scrambles towards the cave to escape the torrential downfall.  Crossing a newly made gully, entering the cave whilst get his breathe back.

Recovering inside the cave with his heart racing from all of the obstacles he overcome, hearing his heart echo inside the silence of the cave. The thunderous noises and shaking slowly starts to come inside the cave, small rocks start falling from the cave roof. Still listening to his heart beat, a faint thumbing noise starts becoming louder in time with the thunderous shakes. 2 hearts beating inside the cave, a murky dark shadow slowly drawing near to Rykin. Silence covered the cave as the thunder stops as the eye of the storm approaches the location of the cave. The beast strikes Rykin, scarring his tail, Stumbling in the entrance of the cave. Rykin dives past the beast to escape the devastating claws. Running into the forest unaware the beast has his scent wanting revenge for entering his home.

Seeking new shelter before the eye of the storm passes, standing on a small tree branch looking for new shelter. About to turn around and make his way to new shelter he has spotted, the beast pounces behind the trees, striking him in the chest. Losing his balance and falling into flowing gully, with the beast scrambling in afterwards. Dropping his as the beast continues to attack him. The creatures are chucked off the end of the gulley into a pit filling up with the downfall water. Struggling for gasps of air as the two fight underneath the  water as branches, rocks flow into the pit. The beast slamming Rykin against a rock with his claws around his neck, quickly losing air.

Dangerous objects bombarding the pit from the gully above as the beast strikes Rykin's arm. A branch hitting the beasts body, giving Rykin the chance to escape the grip of the claws only to have a rock fall on his tail. Letting out the air from his mouth instead of a grown, the beast goes for one last strike. Gashing at Rykin except a branch falls, hitting Rykin and the beast claws grabbing the branch and getting stuck.

Able to get out of the way of the falling branch just in time, Rykin arrives at the surface, scrambling out of the pit before a large log falls in. Rykin sees a new place to take shelter but notices his semi-destroyed home just upon the shelter, scrambling past the shelter and arriving at his home to take shelter from the rest of the storm.



-Joshua

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