Friday 8 March 2013

The creature - Middle


The creature finds a nice tree that reminds him of the ship, staying there for half the night, getting moved on by a pack of squirrels that lives there. Moving on and finding a hole, resting there for a few hours few dawn. Dawn comes and he starts to more on, not liking the hole, he walks into a nice mud area, starting to make himself at home, he walks up wasps that live there and gets chased out. Finally returning to his ship, not liking the island and starts to slowly repair the hull and the ship part by part. 


I'm going to add the end up in the next few days, than going to rewrite each in a new post to turn it into a sentence or two for each section; beginning, Middle, and the end

-Joshua

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