10 step outline, take 2

Howdy, I have reedited my 10 step outline. Parts from the old one are still there, just changed the mid way to end part more.

1. Rykin out hunting in the forest, obtaining food for the upcoming days.

2. A colossus storm consumes the island full of torrential downfall.

3. Rykin starts his travel though the wet environment to find shelter from the storm.

4. Scrambling towards a small cave just a few hundred metres away overcoming the inundated areas.

5. Fleeing inside the cave to take shelter from the growing storm, unaware a beast is furious he has company in his cave.

6. Herded from the cave to escape the angrily attacking beast.

7. Seeing new shelter, the beast pouncing on Rykin from the bushes, Tumbling around fighting tumbling down a gully into a pit.

8. Water quickly submerging the two creatures fighting underwater trying to escape and kill the other before they are killed by drowning.

9. Destruction debris bombards the pit landing on the beast allowing Rykin to swim away.

 10. Escaping the hole and returning to his semi destroyed home to take cover instead of looking for other shelter.


-Joshua